Dear students,
We've seen all of you presented in class for the first assessment. I would love to hear your comments on your own presentation. You are also encouraged to comment on your friends' presentation. Hope that we can learn from each other. Below are the points that you may include in your comments. Cheers!!!!
a.what went well for your presentation
b.what went wrong for your presentation
c.what could have done to make your presentation better
d.useful points that you learn from your friends
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28 comments:
Lim Sing Wee (MH08057)
About my presentation is a little bit messy. There almost nothing go right within what i have planned. Night before the presentation, my practise is around 3 minutes but in the time of presentation is far more faster than what i expected!. In my opinion, the most important parts of presentation is your ability to face the audience. But i fail to do this. I have done all my lecturer told us the way to built confidence but still not brave enough to face the audience! I don't know whether is my psychology problem or i was borned for like this. But anywhere, I will try my best to achieve what i expected and learned from previous lesson! Thats all from me!
che hanisah yaacob(mh08021)
First of all,i quite satisfied with my presentation.I don't feel nervous and scared because before this i beleive that i can stand in front of audience.Unlucky,for this presentation i don't have more information to share with others although i try my best in finding.Next,i think the time given is not enough compare when we talk to our friends.Maybe i was dismiss some important part in presentation so i hope i will try my best to be a good presenter in next time.I hope this mistake can give a lot of experience to do better from this.That's all.
WAN KHAIRUL SALAM BIN WAN MUSLIMIN(MH08022)
Assalamualaikum...
I really think that my presentation is the worst among all. I am speechless, blurred, unconfident, and all that sort of things. It is a really nightmare to think about it again and again. I really hope that on the next presentation I will make a better than this one. The only things went well is my power point slaid. That's all.....
MUHAMMAD ZULFADHLI BIN MD ZAKI
(MH08044)....
Assalamualaikum....
For my presentation,i think i did't do my best and i not satisfied with it because i not prepare vary well..i can't elaborate my point as i plan,because i nervous..i must prepare myself earlier and more confident went i make presentation.
i had learn to become more confident from my friends...that i should do,to have a good presentation!!!!!...that's all.thanks.. see u again miss..
Law Xue Ni(MH08061)
Personally I m not very satisfy with my presentation because the presentation time is limited. I do not have extra time to share my knowledge to my friends and I can only read out the point from the slides after 3 minutes. Besides I felt that my presentation is rather dull and boring if compare to the other friends. Some friends’ presentations are creative and interesting. For my presentation, I think I need to improve my vocabulary. Besides, I should use other creative way to present so that my presentation will attract the audience.
Muhammad Naufal Bin Kamarudzaman (MH08058)
I think my presentation is quite ok but i think i slightly lack of confidence while i presenting on front of the audiens.I admit that i had never really prepared for my presentation.I just think that i can do it without any practice.But my instinct is absoulutely wrong.So, after this i will try to upgrade myself for any kind of incoming presentation...
Mohd Adham Bin Che Abdullah
(MH08026)
I definitely unsatisfied with my perfomance.I think it is because of my half-baked preparation of the slides show.I did not practise properly and adequately because of overconfidence.
Mohd Izzat b Kamarulzaman
(MH08065)
mm,i think my presentation was just ok..
it went smooth..
but the problem is i dont really get the question right..
i forgot to put my information in my slides..
that's all wahat went wrong i think..
and from my friends,i did get some tips for my presentation next time which is to be more alert to the question given n make my slides as simple as i can but yet compact with contents..
i think that's all my opinion on the past presentation..
thank you..
bubye..
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salam......
first at all...
happy fasting..i hope i'm not too late..
hurm...about my presentation...
huhu...shamed to talk about it..
i wish that i could talk a bit more longer...
hee...actually i don't prepare anything..
just get a few point n....gamble...
thats me...
but before this...
i don't facing any problem...
maybe..
it was my first intro experience to stand in front of my friend..
so i had been a few nervous...
huu...hope i will be more better after this...
just that...
see you in da class...
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hello..for me my presentation is ok..i need some more improvement most at my language..i must rarely use the sequence connecter in my presentation..and it is a bit of lack..so i think i must improve more..tq..
assalamualaikum to all of you....
um...firstly,I want to say thank you to miss intan becouse of her advice to me...
also to my friends....
firstly,I think that my present about myself is not bad...
maybe because i have do some practise in my room...
but,actually i still must have improvement...
i am poor in English..
i also a nervous person...
beause i feel something wrong with my face..or my cloth that i wear that day..
and many more..
that is the normal feeling when i want to present in front of people...
but i will try to change it and i will stady from my mistake...
i know that we must start from now because it is impirtant preparation to become a professional engineer one day...
so,as the conclusion,learn to improve, my friends....and myself too...
there is no reason to succeed...
so,good luck!!!hehehe....
that's all from me....
thank you.....
i hope i can do it better in future...
syazwani (mh08073)
i think i was lack of vocabulary and quite shaking while delivering my presentation..now, i felt so sad and not satisfied with my previous presentation.i found myself that i have no eye contact with the audience.althought i have confident to deliver my speech,i still can't make it.it bother me so much.i also have no body language.first of all,i already prepared and i think all those thing became smooth,ut instead of that happen to me.but i still don't give up and i want to make it more better.perhaps,this time became more easier for me to deliver it with some guidence from my friends and my lecturers.
About my presentation..
It was a bit disappointed presentation.
I'm not ready at all ,and have not many idea to describe my point.
For another aspect like eye contact,action and voice laudness are not a big problem..
So for next another presentation,i'll be get ready for it and try my best.. ;)
thank you .~
MHO8O2O
Che Muhammad Ridhwan bin Che Hashim (mh08049)
Assalamualaikum..
I think that my presentation is more like unprepared and unsmoothly even though I had prepared it earlier. Maybe it is because I rarely speaking in english language. I know that while Im giving a speech I need to know what to do and what not to do. But the problem is Im unable to follow the instruction. I am prety sure that I have a long journey before able to become a good presenter.
thank you
(h)(h)
NUR AIN AFIQAH BTE ABDUL LATIFF
MH08028 M01
Firstly,i'm not very staisfied with my presentation last 2 month.This is because i'm not ready to present my slides on that day.Actually i want to talk about many things,but i can't do that.Moreover i feel so nervous when i start talking in front of my classmate and also teacher.Futhermore,i don't have many ideas to make my presentation become better.But never mind,from last presentation i learn something new and i hope in the future i can present my slides better and better.Last but not least,thank you to miss intan for teach me english.That's all from me.Thank you!!
my presentation is about a person who i admire the most since i was little... i think i have done my best to present about mahathma gandhi... but i think i must be a little bit more confidence in presenting something infront some sort of people... and about my slideshow i think it's good enough because i'm quite good in doing that... certainly i feel nervous a bit to present.. i think in a while by taking some time it will be okay.. hopefully my future presentations will be more better than this one... thanks to the audience for listening with patience.. chaiyo..
Shafriq Hafizzan bin Salim(MH08050)
I think my presentation was not perfect that what i want.I had planned before present.But when I'm
present i feel nervous and little confident.I'm not satisfy what have I done on my presentation.from now on i should build my confident,language and alert.
that's all for me...
thank you..
mohd zamri b mohd kama(mh08038)
About my presentation.I think i have done not a very good presentation.Because at that time,i rely to the powerpoint to find elaboration to the point that was written in the powerpoint.And finally i ended up my presentation for only 2minutes and 57 second.Very short period of time i think.But overall,i thannk to Allah because the presentation goin well that day.
Thank you
Muhamad Azman Bin Mohd Yamin(MH08066)
morning..
about my presentation..
There almost nothing go right within what i have planned. Night before the presentation, my practise is around 3 minutes but in the time of presentation is far more faster than what i expected!. In my opinion, the most important parts of presentation is your ability to face the audience. I will try to be confident when doing presentation..
That all..Thank you.
Muhammad Hafizuddin bin Salim
MH08074
About my presentation i'm glad to say that i'm very happy with my team and myself.My team work very well to finish our presentation product.I also very satisfied with my way of presentaion because i feel very comfortable when i present my product because of good support from my teacher.Because of that i feel very confident while present my product.But,i want to say that presentation is not all of me.I belive that i can do better if i've been given one more chance.In the next presentation i will do my best shot.
Muhamad Solehin Daud.
MH08059
Assalamualaikum...
I really think that my presentation is the worst among all. I am speechless, blurred, unconfident, and all that sort of things. It is a really nightmare to think about it again and again. I really hope that on the next presentation I will make a better than this one.k tq.bubye
i think my presentation is not so good.i'd failed to manage my time accurately,such as what im going said this thing first,second and so on..my elaboration about my points are not so brievely,so i thought my audience did not understood what i'm trying to tell..
there are so many tips and techniques while doing presentation and if you want your presentation superb..
here we go..
o If you have handouts, do not read straight from them. The audience does not know if they should read along with you or listen to you read.
o Do not put both hands in your pockets for long periods of time. This tends to make you look unprofessional. It is OK to put one hand in a pocket but ensure there is no loose change or keys to jingle around. This will distract the listeners.
o Do not wave a pointer around in the air like a wild knight branding a sword to slay a dragon. Use the pointer for what it is intended and then put it down, otherwise the audience will become fixated upon your "sword", instead upon you.
o Do not lean on the podium for long periods. The audience will begin to wonder when you are going to fall over.
o Speak to the audience...NOT to the visual aids, such as flip charts or overheads. Also, do not stand between the visual aid and the audience.
o Speak clearly and loudly enough for all to hear. Do not speak in a monotone voice. Use inflection to emphasize your main points.
o The disadvantages of presentations is that people cannot see the punctuation and this can lead to misunderstandings. An effective way of overcoming this problem is to pause at the time when there would normally be punctuation marks.
o Use colored backgrounds on overhead transparencies and slides (such as yellow) as the bright white light can be harsh on the eyes. This will quickly cause your audience to tire. If all of your transparencies or slides have clear backgrounds, then tape one blank yellow one on the overhead face. For slides, use a rubber band to hold a piece of colored cellophane over the projector lens.
o Learn the name of each participant as quickly as possible. Based upon the atmosphere you want to create, call them by their first names or by using Mr., Mrs., Miss, Ms.
o Tell them what name and title you prefer to be called.
o Listen intently to comments and opinions. By using a lateral thinking technique (adding to ideas rather than dismissing them), the audience will feel that their ideas, comments, and opinions are worthwhile.
o Circulate around the room as you speak. This movement creates a physical closeness to the audience.
o List and discuss your objectives at the beginning of the presentation. Let the audience know how your presentation fits in with their goals. Discuss some of the fears and apprehensions that both you and the audience might have. Tell them what they should expect of you and how you will contribute to their goals.
o Vary your techniques (lecture, discussion, debate, films, slides, reading, etc.)
o Get to the presentation before your audience arrives; be the last one to leave.
o Be prepared to use an alternate approach if the one you've chosen seems to bog down. You should be confident enough with your own material so that the audience's interests and concerns, not the presentation outline, determines the format. Use your background, experience, and knowledge to interrelate your subject matter.
o When writing on flip charts use no more than 7 lines of text per page and no more than 7 word per line (the 7 7 rule). Also, use bright and bold colors, and pictures as well as text.
o Consider the time of day and how long you have got for your talk. Time of day can affect the audience.After lunch is known as the graveyard section in training circles as audiences will feel more like a nap than listening to a talk.
o Most people find that if they practice in their head, the actual talk will take about 25 per cent longer. Using a flip chart or other visual aids also adds to the time. Remember - it is better to finish slightly early than to overrun.
so i hope you will going great in your presentation next time...
xoxo..
Muhamad Nurzami bin Ab Sota (MH08027)
Assalamualaikum....
I feel very unsatisfied with my presentation.My presentation is very bad than the others.I'm always not prepared anything before starting an any presentation.That is because during the presentation i feel nervous,not confident,cannot speak clearly and hard to remember anything what should I speak.The effect of my behaviour like this may causes I get a lower mark for my presentation..But anywhere, I will try to improve my speech and behaviour in next time so that I will get confident to start my presentation..hopefully all of my friends and lecturer can help me to solve of all this problem...
Mohd Norhafizan bin Ibrahim (MH08064)
Firstly. assalamualaikum and good morning to Mis Intan. I think my presentation has a few missing or problem when i do the presentation. For example, i just read the paper and slide when i fell nervous. Actually, i think my pronounciation may be not correct fully, but i will try myself to improve it. After that, i think i have done eye contact with my friend at forward at presentation time. I think at this moment i fell more confidence when do the presentation,after do many presentation at class. Actually,i fell very serious and not give smile to my friends at forward. With that, i promise to my selt for repair that problem to give better presentation at future time. That all,i think for me.I will use this experience to improve myself more better at future. Thank you and assalamualaikum again to teacher Mis Intan.
Well I think on went ok.....
I cannot say I'm satisfy with it,but I will try to improve my english in the next presentation...
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