Hi students..Well done for completing Assessment 1 which was the oral presentation. You presented on either the uniqueness of a characteristic of yourself or about your legend. I'm sure you have learnt a few things from the assessment as well as from your friends. Share your ideas and opinions on the assessment that we had. Do comment on these things:
a. What do you think of your own presentation?
b. How can you improve your presentation in the future?
c. Things you learnt from your friends
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Well ... I think my presentation is quite simple and understandable to all ... Indeed that quite a few people do the presentation about their characteristic ... To improve my prestentation, I need to understand more about the tips of doing the presentation ... About the things I've learnt from my friend's presentation, I've learnt that there are many legends that influence our ways of living ... Among the legends is Bill Gate, Hayao Miyazaki, and lots more ... Although they are famous legends, they also share the kindness to everyone ... Not only that, they also share their knowledge to let us live an easier life ... That's all for my comment and thank you ...
NAME : NURUL AFIQAH BINTI ZAINAL
ID : FB09033
Iam not very satisfied with my presentation because lots of mistake i have done during the presentation. Lake of confident, nervous, those kind of things come in the same time. I also realized that i not be able to speak fluently and correctly.Because of that, I have to improve myself to be much better on the presentation. I have to prepare early, learn more vocabulary everyday and practice more on it. For me that is a must in order to achieve an excellent result. Other than that, I think all my friends done well in their presentation. Although there are some mistakes and shortage, all of that can be overcome by time.Thank you.
Oh well,i do learnt a few things from the previous oral presentation.My comments are as listed as below :
a)In my humble opinion,my previous presentaion was just ok and I think there are still ways for me to improve my presentaion. The biggest problem that i have faced earlier was i did not manage to prepare my speech well due to the last-minute work and just read according to my sppech and I did not have much contact with the audience. I also felt nervous and trembled in fear at the beginning of my presentation.But glad to say, I managed to finished my presentation with the applause from the audience.I was happy about that.
b)In my point of view,I think that there are stil spaces for me to improve my oral presentation.For instance,I can form a group of students and gather informations on the topic together. With that, I think we all can gather various kinds of useful informations in seconds with the coorperation of the group members.Besides that,I think that I should spend more time in order to practice on the way that I am going to deliver the speech,as well as the body language and the communication skills. Designing the slideshow creative is also another alternative way to draw the attention of the audience.
c) There are few things that I have learnt from my friends. First and foremost,I have learnt on ways to improve my presentaion slideshow's quality by inserting interesting and attracting media such as songs and sound effects so that my slideshow does not look too boring for the audience. Secondly,I have learnt that it is neccessary to reduce the number of words in my slideshow. Instead, I should deliver to the audience regarding the elaborations and descriptions and not posting everything into the slideshow.Last but not least,I have learnt to present with loud and clear voice when delivering my presentation speech so that the audience are able to get the message that I delivered to them.
Thank you. Good day.
Well..I think my presentation still not bad..however..there is still have space to improve..I think my elaboration is still not very clear and smooth..so I need to practice more and use english more frequently in my daily life.. some of my friends did very well in their presentation as they can attract the attention of audience during presentation..I hope next time I can aslo do like that and make my presentation more interesting to prevent audience from sleeping ;-)
UMMU SYAFIQAH BT. MD TARMIZI
FB09036
i've done my oral presentation, honestly, i'm not statisfied with my presentation.. A lot of mistake i have done and a lot of think i want to share with my friends. Indeed iam too nervous and i can't said what i should said in front of them. All idea in my mind get lost. My presentation slide also not really good and what i proud about my presentation i still can handle it and try to overcome my nervous when stand in front of people..
i think i should learn more how to pronounce the word and gain my confidence when stand in front of people...
About the thing that i learnt from my friend's presentation., there are many legend that influence their life..., even though they are famous people or legend but they still have value that can influence people mind.. and some of them also shared about themselve make us understand them more and most important thing is i can improved and learn more how to be a good presenter while looked at their performance... They done very well, Thank you..
NAME:ZAHIDAH BINTI ANSARI
ID NO: FB09004
hi readers!! i have done my presentation about myself.i think i just did the average because i think i look so clumsy and kind of out off place.i do admit that i lost control of it a bit in certain part.hopefully you won't realize it.this is the moment when i start to talk nonsence and came out with unrelated theories n stories. overall i think i could do better in time and i believe i need to practice my english usage more to improve my skills in public speaking. in addition, i learn lots of new things from my friends presentations. they acknowledge me with lots of information about the life of successful individuals. but for some of them that choose to do the same topic as me, i get the chance to get to know them better. i hope in time we will all be a huge n fun-funky family.
khairunnisa bt Abd Ghani@Hashim
fb09013
I have done a lot of presentation before this since at school or matriculation, however this is the best topic I've done. It is because I really sure that I understand it well, which the tittle is "The best Characteristic of me", it also because I have enough time to do the slide presentation and I really enjoy while doing that. I also got some inspiration from my friends to make it more interesting eventhough it is a bit ashamed. But, I dont think that I presented it well..=(. As my lovely lecturer, Miss Intan said we need to arranged the flow of our presentation right?..I've done those things but I could not manage to do and follow that because I an too nervous and could not make myself calmed. So, I think that is the big problem of mine.
In order to improve it in the future I think that I need more practices in front of people, to increase my confident level. I also need to talk calmly so that the audience can easily understand me and my presentation can be more interesting.
Lastly......thanks a lot to my classmates and beautiful Miss. Intan for giving me a lot of lessons along two weeks of the presentation. I can learnt how the presentation can be worst because of some small thing...and how a presentation can be really good when we do it with all our heart and effort.
It is very long weeks for me but i learnt a lot from that. Thank you.
NUR QAMARINA ZAUDI
FB09043
For my presentation I think there is a lot more stuff that can be improve.
Especially the stammering part.
Overall,im quite satisfied but wished I've done better.What do you think of mine miss? Comment needed
please.
:)
I think i should learn the art of delivering good messages to audience.To gain more confidence and to make my presentation more intresting.
Some of the things that i learnt from them is we should not be afraid to express ourselves in front of other people.As long as we have good and concrete reason on why we are supporting certain matters.
yo-heave-ho... i also not satisfied wit my presentation as i thinh i can do much much better than that..but due to this presentation i learn a lot of thing..especially from all of my friend.. so i will keep trying my best to improve myself.. especially not be shy anh have eye contact when dong my presentation.. that's all what i wan to say.. goodbye.. thank for read this..
huhuhuh....about presentation actually,i not satisfied with my marks given but i must accepted it.well,i think my presentation is not too bad,i will improve myself over an over and i have many thing from my friend.thanks...
Hallo...
I think I learnt a lot of things from my presentation. Although my presentation is not good like my friends but I do it all my best. I always have problem during my presentation. The main problem is nervous. I always nervous in any presentation. I hope next time I will do well in the presentation. Maybe next i should prepare an interesting presentation to prevent my friends sleep. That’s all...
Thank you.
Assalamualaikum...
Actually,i'm not fully prepared for my presentation that day...i just have finished my powerpoint slide once you called my name..so, i'm getting very very very nervous to do presentation that day b'coz i'm really didn't expect you will called my name.I just can read on slide on that day...
Unfortunately, i actually want to tell everyone more about Sinking of Titanic incidence..I know that everyone did not know much about that..
however,i just can satisfied with my effort to do presentation. For another coming presentation, i will prepare earlier to get better presentation..
Sorry if my presentation was dissapointed you..
That's all..Thanks
My presentation is about my legend..,
i'm not very satisfied with my presentation because i'm a weak presentation.i'm very scared to present to audience.i don't have a confident and i don't have enough content in my slide show.so, i think i should improve myself by practice before the presentation to get more confident and experience to present..
FB09042
FARHANA
I am not satisfied with my presentation since i am not well prepared for that day presentation. I am also forget my point during presentation. Nervous its maybe why i not do well presentation. so i will take it as a chance to improved my presentation. I will try to read and use english language more frequently to improved my grammar. I think all of my friend doing well for their presentation even they make some mistake. maybe we can learn something useful from our first presentation for better presentation after this. thank you
1.i think my presentation is not so good,but finally i have gone through it with all my best.i have well prepaired for many days ago before i present.i very worry about my presentation,because i not use to stand infront of many people and give present,futhermore my english is not so good,i think i will find ways to improve my english,because as a engineer,the english is a must!
b.i think i should start with practice my grammar first,then just i can speak well.Beside,i will learn how to stand infront of many people without scare,i will try my all my best and brave enough to stand infront of all of you,and i will give the best among the best prensentation to all of you for future time.
c.The things i have learnt from my friend is brave enough and enegetic to stand infront of all the audience without scare,panick when presentation.Next is the eyes contact with all the audience.i think that's all for my comment.Thank you...
hello...about my presentation...i think my presentation is too simple and quite boring because i can see it from the audience face during they heared my presentation...my powerpoint slide had weakness to get attention from the audience because it have too many words...and of course will make the audience feel bored...the eye contact with the audience also weak...i have to improve my presentation...the way i can improve it, is by talking with many people so that i can build the confidence in myself...other than that i have to try to avoid using too many words in my slide presentation...that's all i think about my presentation...about my friends presentation, i think most of them can perform well than me, because they do be well prepared on their presentation...i learn many things after see their presentation...and i hope that i will be better in presentation other time...that's all from me...thank you...
I feel unhappy with my recent presentation because I have done a lot of mistakes during my presentation.The topic which is I have selected is The Legend.I feel that I fail to give that presentation properly and the information I collected not enough.
Then, I do not prepare well before the presentation.I am also not
be able to speak fluently because I am feeling nervous.I hope that,
next time I will do my level best... To improve my presentation in the future, i will do lot of practice to speak well.Then, I will do my slide properly for prsentation... I feel that some
of my friends did very well in their presentation. They attract the audience and have finished their presentation succesfully.So, I hope, I will do my presentation more interesting in future...
zack_wan
ermm...i don't know my presentation is good or not but for me it's okey..still more skill of presentation can be improve by learnig..many of ways i can do to improve my skills through my beloved teachers and friends...i also can be improved by my own experience...i'm quite love to present because it how we introduse myself to people..the starting of friends..so presentation is a good element that people must do..it teach us how we cummunicate with other people....adios!!!!
Hai..
about my presentation, i think that my presentation was so boring.
It is because it seems that the audiens did not pay attension on that time.The major factor is because i lack of confident when give a speech infront of many people. Because of that, i did not give the good eye contact with the audient..which mean that the audient does not interest on my presentation...it make my presentation so boring... other then that, i have problem to pronouns the words fluently.. on the other hand, i also have problem on my vocabulary. i easily forgot the word that i suppose to use when i do my presentation.. in my next presentation i will try to improve the presentation. i will try to reduce my nervous when talk infront many people... and i will learnt how to pronouns the word correctly...
tq..
hum...i think..a little bit not satisfied with my presentation...cause..my slide have many point and i just read all the point....also..i can see the audience seem like boring heard my presentation.....maybe lack of preparation..i mean preparation from emotion, the slide show, not confident and so on...that's all..
Oh...I think my presentation not so good because I make lot of mistake during delivering my idea.I think I need to learn more about how to deliver my speeh much more effectively.I also must watch lots of video of great speeches...About my friend presentation,quite lots of them choosing MY LAGEND more than MY SELF.To me,it seems like people more like to take an example of way of life from other people rather than creating their own without influnce of other people...I think that all I can comment and thank you
muhamad faruqi bin zahari (FB09012)
well...i think my presentation was quite prepare...but there was a technical problem when presenting the slide...my voice during the presentation is loud but bad pronounciation....Eventhough, to improve my presention is more practice in pronounciate english word .In addition,my presentation can be improve with learning about how to give the best presentation and know about presentation tips from expert presenter...Furthermore, the things that i have learnt from my friend's presention, give confident to myself in prensentation. Other than that, i have learnt about legend, there are many legend that i do not know btu after the presentation, i gain the knowledge about my friend's legend as example bilal bin rabah, i still remember the magic word from bilal that told by my freind, muhammad fitri bin mohamed hassan," i will wait and wait until there will be a person who is going to free all slaves and bring the truth". Knowledge is everywhere, until in the presentation also have a new knowledge to us.... so, that's all for my comment and thank you, espcially to miss Intan that have taught me many thing about english language.
WELL,I think my own oral presentation just ok and i think my powerpoint presentation is simple and esay understand for all person who see.
i think i need go to class oral,improve my word pronunciation,more tall english in my life.
there are some thing learnt from my friend are:
i learnt what is the best powerpoint presentation,
i learnt about how to be the best presenter,
i learnt about how to give a good talk to poeple.
Muhammad Fitri bin Mohamed Hassan
Salam... I think my presentation is the most less slide show,.aaa..
about 4 slide. so,I explain more than read the slide.
My title is about Bilal b. Rabah,
which have advaced character which we could learn from him.His name is being use untill today for those who Adhan.This title is more towards for those who give up in their lives.
My voice is quite clear eventhough there is no microphone provided.From previous presentation from my friends, I think I should be more prepared to stand infront and give full strength so the audience will listen with their heart...
NURUL HAFIZAH BT ABDULLAH HASIM
FB09048
First of all,I'm not satisfied with my presentation because i'm weak in presentation.I'm always feel nervous and shy when talk in front.besides that, i think that my presentation was simple.that is why i felt unconfident at all.because of that, i need to practise more to improve my language.for example try to speak more frequently in my daily life.it will make me more confident than before.for my opinion, my friend's presentation were more better than me because they are well-prepared.then, i will try my best to learn from them. so, i hope that i can perform well for my next presentation.thank you.....
NAME : SITI AFIFAH HASSAN
ID : FB09016
hi there..
during the presentation, i've been talked about al-Khwarizmi..
actually, i'm very nervous that time because i'm not ready with the presentation..
it is because i think my slide was an unawesome slide compared to others..
besides, i'm not really confidence about what am i talked about..
partfrom that, i don't have much content to be presented..
but i've tried my best..
and i feel relieve after presented it..
i'm also not satisfied with my presentation because i got a lot of mistake..
after the presentation i've thought taht i need to improve myself..
thats all..
urm i think my presentation is one of the worst presentation in the class as my nervous feeling had disturb my creative thinking skill and thus affecting my way to speak.that's also the reason why i always forgot the word while in the presentation eventhough i has pepared everything, i mean every word, to say in the presentation.but still, with all the disturbance, i think i had do my best in the presentation although i hadn't meet the objective of the presentation.i know that many of you said that i have many things to be repair, to improve my presentation, to perfection my presentation, but still, i don't know where to start, as i'm one of the laziest person among the mechtronic student, i think..anyway, we still got the time to improve ourselve, right..urm i think that's all from me, for the comment, and lastly, thank you...
NORAIN CHIN
FB09015
hello,i also not satisfy with my presentation. i think a lot of think that i need to learn more especially when i present in front of the audience.about the thing that i learn from my friends presentation,i know many people in this world that very succesfull. and i want to take them as my example to achieve my dream. about my friends presentation, i believe that all my friend had try their very best to present. to miss intan, thank you coz teach me how to be a good presenter.thats all.thank you.
for my assesment,i'm not quite satisfied with it for it was done at the very klast minute. i also had to depend on the picture from the internet for i didn't keep any picture of my own when i go go to ump. besides that i also was quite nervous during the presentation (althought it doesn't look like it). i also n9ot quite satisfied by the time i used to present my presentation for i think it quite short for someone who talks a lot. so, overall ithink i didn't achived the best level in mty presentation.
NOOR ZALIKA KORNAIN
FB09026
wow talking about my presentation..im very proud with myself because i think i do the best that i can.Even my present is not good compare with others..but im still enjoy to do that because the topic given is about 'myself'.Im very understand it well.im lie if i said im not nervous when i present infront of audience.So,next time when i present, i will make sure that i Do not read from notes and speak loudly and clearly.when i see all my friends present,that give me more inspiration to do more better than others!however.....the chance is only one..no second or third chance..let bygone be bygone..next time..i want to do the best!
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