Hi students..Well done for completing Assessment 1 which was the oral presentation. You presented on either the uniqueness of a characteristic of yourself or about your legend. I'm sure you have learnt a few things from the assessment as well as from your friends. Share your ideas and opinions on the assessment that we had. Do comment on these things:
a. What do you think of your own presentation?
b. How can you improve your presentation in the future?
c. Things you learnt from your friends
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I think learning english in the university is quite tough for me..
After finished my presentation,I figured out that it was not easy for a lecturer or even a teacher to deliver speeches or information..I hope that it will not be the last time for me to present anything like this in the future..
my name is syamim. i'm a weak presentator in my class.for my own presentation, i think, my presentation is the worst one in my class. even my voice clear, i think so..but i think all the audience don't understand what i'm talking about.so?..how to improve my presentation?
i must be prepare everything before starting present to my audience.
increase my confidency is the first thing to present smoothly
i think that's for all.so,next time i will try my very best during my presentation
mohd syamim aizat
sa09018
I think that my presentation would be better. I would have put in more effort on my PowerPoint slide show. Besides, I also think that I should not be so nervous during my presentation. As I become nervous, my voice becomes quite soft for others to hear it. Still, I think that my presentation is quite good as I just did my presentation for the first time of my life.
Therefore, in order to improve my presentation in the future, I think I should practice more in front of people to overcome my nervous in front of people. Moreover, I should communicate with others with English to improve my English.
One of the things that I have learnt from my friends is to be more confident in front of people. It is very important to gain confidence in order to improve the presentation. As a person gain confidence, his or her speech will be more attractive to be heard. I also have learnt some of the skill in order to make the slide more attractive. The slides that they make are full of animation and sound effect. We should put some animation or sound effect to make the whole presentation does not full of dullness.
LING SING YING
SA09034
I wasn't very satisfied with my presentation as I think I could have done better. I could have related more to the audience but instead, I was nervous during the presentation. However, I'm also happy that I was given the chance to do this presentation as this is the first time I ever prepared a PowerPoint presentation. Thus, I’m still proud with the outcome.
There are many areas which I can improve on my presentation in the future. One area would be on my PowerPoint slides. I would like it to be more colorful with more effects. Hopefully, it’ll attract the audiences’ attention. Besides that, I hope that I’ll be less nervous when I do my next presentation. If I’m less nervous, my presentation will be smoother and more enjoyable.
Through this presentation, I’ve learnt many things from my friends. I’ve learnt that each and every of my friends are unique in their own ways. They know their strength and the potential that is within them. Thus, I learnt that I should also be sure of my abilities and maximize my potentials. From the presentations of my friends, I’ve also seen that there are many notable figures and incidents that have influence in our lives. These figures and incidents help us learn from mistakes and guide us in our lives.
Ellie Teo
SA09008
1.last 2 week i'm doing my presentation,but its like i'm turn everything wrong...i'm not doing it with confident.i'm not doing it seriously.i can say that this is the first time i destroy my own presentation.i was presenting about princess diana.princess diana is a great person and i shuold presenting the good influence to my friends.eventhough i'm inspired diana the most but i still can doing it in the great ways.
2.if i'm giving the 2nd chance to do the presentation again...i will definitely talk about my ownself.it's more easier,moreover people around me will know me better.actually i already prepare the presentation about myself but several technical problem occur,thus i can't perform what i alredy prepare.it's really disappointed when it happen to me...also being the last person presenting the material is such a nervous thing i've ever feel.thus,if i were a person that have giving the 2nd chance i promise that i will do it in a very amazing ways...i will sing,make ajoke and much more if i could.
3.From the presentation,my friends had comment to me that they are not expecting that i'm going to ruin my own presentation.they said that i'm not suppose that play a fool with my presentation.what i learn is sometime i should be a serious person.
i'm sorry for any grammatical mistake.
Assalamualaikum......
My presentation is about the uniqueness of a characteristic of myself..
I think my presentation is not so good...
I believe that I can do more better than what I did...
Actually I am not prepared perfectly for the presentation...
But I hope miss like my presentation especially my slides show..=)
Overall I am satisfied with my presentation....
For me, the way I can improve my presentation in the future is by preparing myself 100%...
Master the topic, reduce the shyness, be more confident and enjoy the presentation....
Lastly, from my friend’s presentations I’ve learned that we must be confident enough, don’t be too shy, speak clearly and make people feel comfortable with our presentation....
I hope through this oral presentation, it can change me a lot...
That’s all from me...=)
Enjoy this comment...
Have a nice day...(^-^)
hello..
I think my presentation is not too good. I had made some writing errors on the slide. So, it had disturbed my presentation. I am also not very confident when delivering my points. I think that in the future I can be a better presenter if I can improve my mistake.
So that, in the future I will make sure that all my words are correctly written. I also will practice my speech before do the presentation so that I will look more confident in front of my audience and able to handle the technical problem that appears on the presentation. If possible I also will memorize my points so that I will not depend on the slide when delivered my points.
From my observations, some of my friends are good presenter and some of them are weak in speaking. From that, I had make conclusion that we need to well prepared in making presentation. We need to be confident in front of our audience so that we can attract their attention and they will give responds to our presentation. Their responds are very important as the audience's responds can give the spirit to the presenter to continue their speech..
ZUR AIN
SA09003
Hye miss...
Firstly,thanks a lot for giving me a chance to leave my comment here...
i'm presenting about a legend, tunku abdul rahman putra al-haj, which was the same with my classmate,wani.
I'm not so satisfied with my own presentation.
I think there is a lot of things that i missed to talk about.
I just told a little about him which i think i have to give more information about my legend and make more slides. It was the simple one i've ever make...=(
I also felt very nervous during that presentation coz it was my first time presenting power point alone...I just want to finish my presentation as soon as i can during that time. hoho...
What i should do to improve my presentation for the next task is, be more confident and not so nervous as it'll ruin my own presentation. Other than that, i will make more interesting slides and try to attract my friends in my own ways.
I've learnt a lot of things this time...I think most of my friends are confident when they present about their uniqueness and there also some who talk about their legend. Here i can see their creativity and afford to interest the others.
SITI SUHAILA BT ZAKARIA
SA09055
assalamualaikum..hye miss
smat ari rye which will coming soon..
aahhaa...emm about my presentation. i can't forget about my presentation.it is so weak as a university student.the truth i'm not satisfied with my presentation.most about my legend,nicol ann david i just read from my text...supposely i must remember all of the information about her.on that time i also very nervous althought before this i already have presentation during i'm study at matriculation.i'm also less eye contact with the audiences.
so, to overcome all the weakness,what should i do is, more practice before give presentation,other than that i also must give more eye contact to the audiences and less my nervous during the presentation.
and from my friends,many thing that i've learn from them...they are very confident when they are present about their uniqueness.they are more creative and have many idea to make their slide show more interest and got attract the audiences..
i hope i can change my self for the next presentation...that all from me and tq so much coz give me chance to leave my comment...:)
fazirafauzi
sa09028
Hi to Ms Intan....About my presentation, i just can give myself a word, that is moderate. During the presentation, i felt nervous when i am presenting.Beside that,i think my voice was not clear enough.Moreover, i seem like not very confident when standing infront of the audience.But i quit happy about my slide because its look nice and beatiful...
In the future, i will going to learn how to be a good presentor when i am giving a presentation.Besides that, i hope that i will be more natural when i am infont of so many audience.
After all my cousemate had done the presentation, I saw that each of my friends have their own style when they are presenting...Some good technique they used, i will try to use it up.Besides that, the incident that bring up by them is quite meaningful for me and i will try to learn it up.At last but not least,I hope my next presentation will be better than now.
Darren Tan
SA09033
Good evening to everybody.Actually,i think that my presentation is not very satisfied.During the presentation,i felt very nervous.This may be is the reason made me can not do well in this presentation.Although i have done a lot of the preparation, but when i stood at the stage, i started to feel tension and shyness.My voice become small and not clear. It was made my presentation to be unsuccessful.
I think i can improve my presentation by enhance the basic of English.This is because no a good building without a good foundation.I should do more practical and exercise .Moveover try to used english to communicate with each other. It will help me to built-up the self-confidence.
There are many things i learn from my friends during the presentation. As i can see, many of my friends were done a good presentation.Through the presentation, i knew that the confidence is a very important element for a presentation.Beside that, i also learned some skill and technic to make a more attractive powerpoint slide. So the audience will give more attention to my presentation. In conclusion,via this presentation,i was knew my weakness and the way to improve myself.I hope i can conquer it......
leong han wau
SA09030
Assalamualaikum miss............
The oral presentation is about uniqueness of a characteristic of my self.
what i think of my own presentation??
my presentation not quite good as other people because i am not enough prepare while doing the assessment.my voice not strong enough and no eye contact with my audience.I'm fell shy and not confident while doing the presentation.I fell my presentation so bored.
How can i can improve my presentation??
I can improve my presentation by doing enough preparation and practice the presentation before delivering it to the audience. Next,I also have to improve my english by reading more english books and do not shy to speak english with my friends.I also have to grab my audience attention with some humor or tell something related story to keep my audience attention. Lastly,i must maintain eye contact with all of your audience.
Things I learn from my friends are do the beautiful slide such as put the animation, effect and beautiful picture to attract my audience attention.
Nur Izzati Ahmad Nasir
SA09019
firstly, for my presentataion about my legend..i think that it was disaster..i honestly don't know of what am i talking about.,not to be ready, is not the best reason why it happen, but it was..i don't bring my edited slide show.,so that i juz talking what do i remember about my legend without refering to the slide.
secondly, being all prepared will make me more confident to talk..perhaps, with a good slide prepared, i can control my nervesness..
last but not least..during the presentation, i discover lots of people can talk well.,mayb they still shy or not sure of what are they doing..of course they are bettr then me.,i'll try to improve my speech presentation and to be good like others.
Saiful
SA09039
My name is Yew Chong.I do think that I did fairly in my presentation as i was nervous during the time when I did it.Speaking in front of the class was a bit awkawrd to me as I wasn't really have my confidence speaking in front of the public.During my presentation,I was a bit distracted when I'd realise that I was unable to get the attention from the audiences,and this has slighly affected my performance in doing my presentation.
I do think that my presentation can be improved by preparing my presentation days earlier before the day of the presentation.Furthermore,I do think that I need to practice speeching in front of my friends frequently to develop my confidence during my next presentation.
I learnt alot of things from my friends during the presentation.I do notice that some of my friends were able to speak fluently during the presentation as they possessed a very strong base in english.Some of my friends were charismatic and this was shown in their way of presenting their presentation.Last but not least,I will do my best in my presentation next time.
Lai Yew Chong
SA09051
GOH WEI JIAN
SA09052
Hello Miss Intan,
My oral presentation title is "The legend”. In this presentation, I talk about my legend, a historical footballer. I’m quite comfortable with this title, because I have a good acknowledgement about him, Van Nistelrooy. I can talk anything about him, like his background, his career, his achievement and etc. As what I can observe when my friend is giving the presentation, I can conclude that many of my friend are choose a wrong title. They should choose the title that they are familiar with. This will make them feel comfortable when they are presenting.
Actually I not satisfied with performance in my oral presentation, because I’m quite nervous in front of my friend. I’m not a confident person, I’m afraid of stand in front of public. In this presentation, I’m less contact with my friend, and even eye-contact. And my sound volume is quite low. I think many of my friend sit at the back will not listen to my presentation. Some more, I get stuck in my presentation many times; because I’m not prepared enough before I start to present. As a result, many word I could not pronounce correctly.
I think I should practice in front of a mirror to build up my confidence. Besides, I should fully prepare before I start presenting in the class. Moreover, I should make my PowerPoint slideshow more nicely; I have to make it colorful and interesting.
Through this presentation, I’ve learnt a lot of things from my friends. For an example, all of my friends had their own personalities that are difficult to imitate. We should have our own personalities; we should show our best to the audience to make them trust ourselves. Besides, most of my friends had showed their own technique to attract concentration from the audience. This is the kind of technique I should learn.
assalamualaikum...
about my presentation, first of all i'm glad for myself because can done it.
honestly, i don't prepared it very well before i presented it.
and i'm also very nervous while present in front. i'm also don't know what i talk. perhaps, with a good slide prepared, i can control my nervesness..
last but not least, i'll try to improve my speech presentation and to be good like others.
my name is ilancheliyan..i think my presentation was terrible..it din't went as i thought it would be...i forget some of the points in the middle of the presentation..i think i supposed to prepare more and get more points...my grammar has to be improve...i get to know some of the great legends that i never get to know before...beside that it was a new experience listening to new presentor other thsn the lecturer...
my name is ilancheliyan..i think my presentation was terrible..it din't went as i thought it would be...i forget some of the points in the middle of the presentation..i think i supposed to prepare more and get more points...my grammar has to be improve...i get to know some of the great legends that i never get to know before...beside that it was a new experience listening to new presentor other thsn the lecturer...
I feel I have done well during the presentation because I have done the preparation before I give the presentation. So, I feel proud with my self......However, I feel there are still got a lot of weakness in my presentation. During the presentation, I fell very nervous and scared……Due to the reasons, I cannot speak fluently and tell the ideal successfully to the audiences. So, I had promise to myself I will be more confident during deliver my presentation next time. To achieve my aim, I had done the practice in front the mirror because practice make perfect. This action is to help me correct my gesture and face expression. Besides that, I also have to learn a lot from my friend during they give their presentation. During the presentation, some of my friend, they have done very well in presentation because their slides show very attractive and very nice. In addition, some of them have a very good opening and have their own unique.
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Goh Diana
SA09001
my name is ilancheliyan..i think my presentation was terrible..it din't went as i thought it would be...i forget some of the points in the middle of the presentation..i think i supposed to prepare more and get more points...my grammar has to be improve...i get to know some of the great legends that i never get to know before...beside that it was a new experience listening to new presentor other thsn the lecturer...
MUHAMMAD QUSYAIRI BIN HASHIM
SA09040
The topic that I had chosen for my presentation was the 20th July Plot. It is a conspiracy to killed the Führer of Germany then, Adolf Hitler.
I am satisfied with my presentation but there is a little problem that I manage to identify. My organization of point and also the relevent of the topic discuss. I've been jumping from he people involve in the conspiracy, their target and also information about the plot
i.e. casualties, period of planning conspirator that had been executed etc.
I think I'm able to make my presentation better by preparing for it early. During the presentation, I had taken more time than that is given to me. I should practice with the time so that such problem will not occur again.
For other student presentation, I think they had done a good job. But there is still aspects that can be review so that a better presentation is given next time. One of the problem that I noticed was regarding the lack of confidence. If this happen, it will affect the presentation wholly. The point cannot be explain clearly when the audience is more 'interested' in the presenter nervousness. Another problem is their voice projection, even when they are using microphone, the word spoken cannot be understand clearly.
I do not have anything to be concluded from my comment but I just hope that me and my friends can give a better presentation in the future.
first and foremost is about the presentation..i think my presentation was not very good. This is because many points that i'm not explain very well. The technical problem to my slideshow also disturbed my presentation. I hope i can improve my presentation before the end of this semester.
Secondly about the way to improve my presentation. I think i should prepare better and better for next presentation.How to prepare? I think i should train harder such as present my presentation in front of mirror,so the confidence will come a little bit.Moreover, I should read more english magazine and newspaper to improve and enhance my vocabulary,so i can use it in my presentation.
Lastly,about the things that i can learn from my friends. I saw that many of my friends are good presenter. They also have a lot of confidence to speak in front of people.They also know how to attract the audience. I hope i can learn something from my friend.
FAiRuL HAiZaD
SA09044
assalamualaikum wbt.....
my presentation is about of my legend...
I think my presentation is very weak..I know the audience can't accept what i inform because my voice is not clear and slow..i feel nervous when i'am talk to audience so i'am cannot focused for my presentation..
Therefore,to improved my presentation in the future i'am must be more practise and try speak in front of many people and try learn more about the english...
I think that's all from me,next time i'm will be try my best..insyAlLAH..
my presentation is not good enough..
there too many mistake by me especially my pronunciation that cause my presentation become bad..
i will try to improve my pronuciation in the future to make sure that i will good prensentation..
i learn a lot of things from my friens that help me lot in my prensentation..
Assalamualaikm........
hye miss
i think that my presentation is not so good.i'm quite nervous when i speak to the front of the audience..but i try my best to speak clearly and fluently.....
sometimes i can't have a good eye contact with the audience..my slide show is quite simple ...
i did not prepare well enough
for this presentation....
so that i have to improve for the future presentation..
i have to practice more on speaking to the others...actually i have to prepare well before the presentation ..I should remember my speech well before the presentation..
i have learned from my friends that we should have confident to give the presentation...we also must have good eye contact with the audience..
i will try to do my best in the future...=)
SITI MARIAM SUPIAN
SA09009
good day everyone..
assalamualaikum....
In this class we are going to have a presentation. Each people are being evaluate based on their spelling,pronounciation,appeareance and their slides. After doing the presentation ,i have find out that i'm very poor when having a presentation.I feel so nervous and cannot control myself from giggling.I feel it is because lack of confidence. This situation spoiled my presentation.When you are not confident,your spelling, pronounciation will be very poor. I will try to increased my confidence to have a good presentation.The thing that i have learned from my friends is everyone have their own skill of presentation that i can learned to improve my skill of presentation.....be somebody
Ahmad Faisal
SA09037
Thank you so much because you had help me in improving my langugage.I'm sure that i got many good thing since be your student.I think I have done my presentation succesfully. im so sure that my presentation not so much better.And one more thing i'm realize after do so much presentation in this class is its help me to increase my self confident especially talking in english.
For me to improve my presentation is absolutely be prepared and keep on study for that material we have to present. It will help us to more confident to deliver our speech.
Furthermore, starting from now and onward we should confident to face and communicate with more people.
I think that's all for me.
Hello Miss Intan...
a. My oral presentation is about myself. For me I realized that my presentation is not good enough to get good marks. Even though Miss Intan already gives us some tips on how to make good presentation, but I still do the same mistake like I don’t speak properly, I felt nervous and forgot what I have to say. I also lack of confident and maybe I’ve done something inappropriate during the presentation. Honestly I’m not ready for the presentation and that is my fault.
b. For the next presentation, I will prepare myself earlier and the important one is be more confident. I will do my power point better and do more practices.
c. From the other’s presentation, I learned how to speak in front of others, to be confident when delivering the speech.
assalamualaikum....
hi miss:-)
my presentation is about my uniqueness.
From my opinion,my presentation is not bad but not so good.Overall i not very satisfies with my presentation.I should not be so nervous during my presentation.It will cause my presentation become more worst.
Beside that,i think i must do more preparation before makes a presentation.On the other hand,i must also be friendly with my presentation.The important things in my presentation is must be more confident.
what i can learn from my friends presentation is don't be shy and do the animation that can get more attention from audient.
that all from me....
roziana bt ramli
sa09047
My name is mohammed.My presentation was about my legend which i think i did good enough ,though i hestiated abit and i was even about not to do it.It is right that at the beginning is hard for any one to attract the audience attention,but i believe that ,at the end, i was capable to manage to draw the audience and made them react effectively.I strongly believe that with more presentation i will do far much better.
Hi miss intan. My name is Nazratul. I'm not good in presentation. I really afraid and shy to be stand in front of peoples and talk to them, even I know them all. futhermore, my pronounciation and grammar will make audience laugh at me.
But it was not an accuse to me to avoid it. Before starting the presentation, I should have prepare mentally and physically. I also have to practice more. I hope with this practise I will be more confident and do better.
thank you
Nazratul Zaheera
SA09050
assalamualaikum...
after doing my presentation, i think my presentation is very weak.itwas hard to speak in front of many peopple.i don't know if i can improved my presentation later, but i should try my best..hehe..i saw my few of my friend present very good in front.i need to be more brave and serious whwn speak in front..
that's all..
thank you..
salam.. I’m a student who weak in English subject. But I try hardly to give the best preformed in my presentation... I’m so worry if teacher will give low marks for me... that am because my grammar is to worst. Can you give me the way how can I be a good presentation?
Last month,i have a presentation.I choice my self as my title of presentation.At that day of presentation,i was feel variety of feeling.Shame,afraid,nervous and a lot more feeling that i can't be describe how is it was.In my mind set,I just want to finish my presentation as soon as i can during that time.
But i have try my best during that day.I think my presentation is not so good.I used a lot of broken english.Beside that,because i am so nervous that time,i have a lot of error in pronunciation.
What the best thing,is my slide show is interesting.I think all my friends like my slide show.I put more grafic picture that describe who i am.I have include two way comunication with them,so that they were not bored to heard my speech and will enjoy with my presentation.
Those are some improvement that I must have,so that I will have good presentation next time.
-Must have good preparation before the presentation day.
-Have a lot of practice.Try to speak English with friends or people at surroundings.
-Must be more confident.
-The most important,must have good eye contanct with audiences.It will make the audiences more interested to hear our speech and can attract their attention and they will give good responds to our presentation.
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