Thursday, August 20, 2009

Reflection on Assessment 1: F09/F10

Hi students..Well done for completing Assessment 1 which was the oral presentation. You presented on either the uniqueness of a characteristic of yourself or about your legend. I'm sure you have learnt a few things from the assessment as well as from your friends. Share your ideas and opinions on the assessment that we had. Do comment on these things:
a. What do you think of your own presentation?
b. How can you improve your presentation in the future?
c. Things you learnt from your friends

28 comments:

iqbal~!~!~ said...

Name : Muhammad Iqbal Bin Jafar
Id : FB09035
Sec : F09

First of all Assalamualiakum to all. ...
About my oral presentation.. I think is bad.. very bad actually..
I think I can do better.. but.. I’m not prepare...
My presentation is about my legend that is fourth prime minister of Malaysia the one and only Tun Dr Mahathir ..
My first mistake about my presentation is lack of point... Honestly, I don’t know anything about Tun Dr Mahathir. I choose Dr M because he is the famous people and have a lot of contribution to Malaysia.. Secondly, I don’t prepare my slide well… I start make my slide is at 3.00 a.m. and same day as I present my slide. I complete my slide is about 10 minutes before my turn to present. I’m so nervous that day and so tired. But, I satisfy with my mark.. tq Miss Intan..;-)~~
There are many things that I need to improve on my previous presentation. First, I want to change my legend. Maybe I choose Kurt Cobain. He is the legendary of grunge music. If I choose him as my legend, a lot of point can come spontaneously. This is because I like grunge music and I’m fan of Nirvana. Second, I will do my slide earlier. I don’t want to do it last minutes. It makes my slide nothing interesting. I also want to put some sound effect in my slide so that the audience can enjoy my presentation.
I have learned a lot of thing from my friend presentation. For instant, I learn how to make a better slide. I learn this from Siti Nadira slide. She makes her slide very attractive. She put some sound effect, so that audience can enjoy. That sound effect actually makes me focus on her presentation. Besides that, I also learn a lot of characteristic of many people including their legend and themselves. This oral presentation also makes me know my friend closely because some of them talk about their past, favorites and character.

Thats all from me.. Thanks... ;-)~~

~ferhana^ said...

Name:NOOR FERHANA ABDUL MUTALIB
Mtrc:FB09053
Sect:F10


Holla!
On the day when the oral assessment was held,I was such in a very clumsy condition.Accidently,my loan interview for the Pahang Foundation also held on the same day and time.So i have to get in rush to be in both places.Gratefully, Miss Intan are very understanding.She gave a priority to me to make a present immediately.

So i began my presentation in such a hurry and lost in control a bit.
My presentation is about myself and i think i didn't elaborate the ideas clearly.Hopefully,in the future,i can improve my presentation by giving a full energy to attract audience and be more well prepared.One more thing,I should talk in steady rate and stay calm.

By the way,some of my friends did such a very great presentation.They make me learnt on how to organized a better and attractive slide.Beside that,a few of them also were presenting with high level confident and maximizedly express their thought.
Next time,i will try to do better and show some improvement as well.
INSYAALLAH..

Daa..

mohamad izzat bin baharudin said...

Assalamualaikum miss intan....

The oral presentation is about uniqueness of a characteristic of my self. About my presentation, i think that my presentation is not very satisfied. I always have problem during my presentation. The main problem is nervous! That i not be able to speak fluently and correctly. I failed make eye contact with my audience.
For the future,i must get hard improvement. I should practice more in front of people to overcome my nervous in front of people. I must be prepare everything before starting present to my audience. i will make more interesting slides and try to attract my friends in my own ways. Lastly,i must maintain eye contact with all of your audience.

There are many things i learn from my friends during the presentation. One of the things that I have learnt from my friends is to be more confident in front of people. I hope i can change my self and get be better than now for the next presentation.

Mohamad izzat Bin Baharudin
FB09057

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Unknown said...

Name:Nur Syazwani binti Samsudin
ID No.:FB09051
Sect:F09

Hmm…I think I’ve done quite well, no….there’s too many lacks in my presentation that should be improve especially on the contents. I have to admit that there’s a part I become blur and don’t know what to say, but still not bad, rite? I’ve choose “myself” as a topic. If I had a chance to improve my previous presentation, I’ll add more related picture on the slide and try to be more confident on my presentation. I should learn more how to be a good presenter and how to attract people to watch and listen to my presentation. And the most important thing is…., I’ve to stay calm... (^_^) But still…it doesn’t mean 2nd is better. I’ve learnt so many things from others presentation, but I noticed that some of them who choose legend as their topic just pick one legend and make it as their legend and as I found that they just pick it and not really admire them. Well….nobody is perfect isn’t it? But no doubt that some of them really do the nice job. I’ve also got some idea from their presentation. About their self, the thing that I should know and some other things which is very useful and interesting to share. Hopefully in the future I will become more confident and perform better than before.
Daaa..

Unknown said...

Name :Mohamad Firdaus Bin Omar
Id : FB09010
Sec : :F09

Assalamualaikum and a very good morning to all.It not to late for me to wish Selamat Hari Raya to all muslim in the world.In this post,I would like to do some reflection about my oral presentation.

About my presentation,I think that what I had talk might be something that negative because I describe myself as a liar.Although I describing about myself,but I still not satisfied with the way I doing the presentation.I think I might had done better if I had well prepared with my presentation although it just about myself.The biggest mistake about my presentation might be the title that i choose.I describe myself as a liar which reflect myself as a negative person.Maybe lying is a negative attitude but look from the bright sight,sometimes people lied to make other happy and thats how lying works for me.

In my opinion,I can improve my presentation by getting prepared early with all the material for the presentation.Besides that,all the material should be arranged in the correct order which mean the material should be arranged so that the presentation can flow smoothly.Besides that,I should make my presentation more cheerful and should have more participated from the audience which can make a connection between me and audience.

From the oral presentation that had been done by all the class members,I can get to know my friend better because some of them describe their self.They talk about their experience and hobby which help me to learn more about them.Furthermore,I could learn some technique to do presentation from my friend.Some of them doing a good slide that can attract people to hear the presentation and that can give me an inspiration for my future presentation.After all,I want to thank Miss Intan for giving me to do the presentation which help me to improve my skill and also help me to get along with other members of the class.

thats all that i can said.Thank you=)

tinta_mujahid said...

Nmae : AHmad Zainul Ariffin Bin
Mohamad
id: FB09031
sec: F09

Assalamu'alaikum n greeting to all.. for me i'm not satify with my presentation, why is it i'm not satisfy with my own presentation? hmmm... i would like to say that i'm still weak in the presentation, i'm not very prepared with my presentation.
in my presentation, there is lots of weakness, i think.. it such an big mistake for me to do a presentation without preparing the note..
point is the main problem with my presentation, every point really important in the presentation. then myself, i cannot speak english properly during the presentation, my vocab also low, it affect my presentation.. such a shamed thing..
I positively think that there is lot of thing i need to improve based on my previous presentation.. first thing is myself, i must make sure that my pronounciation is clear and my vocab wiil be improved... then about my presentation topic, i must think wisely before do a choice.. i must choose the right topic that suitable for me.. also my slide, it must be easy to people understand..
there is lots of morale i gets from my friends presentation, we must think creatively in our presentation, also be flexible person that can suit any environment... we must a confidence in our self. from this i can understand my friend personality more...

ted said...

Name : Ahmad fathi Bin Mohd Zainuddin
Id No. : FB09041
Sec. : F09LB

Asslamualaikum and a very good day to all...
Today I will like to comment about my past oral presentation. First of all i think it was bad and i think i can do better if there is another chance. I was presented about myself.
There is a lot of mistakes that i did in that presentation. Firstly I did not know truly about myself. So it is hardly for me to present well. Second I did not prepare well for that presentation because of last minute worked. So I had to depend on my slide 100 percent without not looked at it.
Other factor was my slide is too little because of not enough point. That is why my presentation too short and boring. Otherwise my presentation will be awesome. Besides that I am so nervous to present. That is my major problem since I was in school.
Last but not least I think I can do better next time and I try my very best to improve my skill of present. That all from me and have a nice day.
Peace!!

khazzarul said...

Name:Mohd khazzarul khazreen bin mohd zaidi
id:fb09038
sec:f09lb

Assalamualaikum and a very good tuesday to all
Today i want to comment about my oral presentation that i did a few weeks ago.I think my oral presentation is not that good.I think i can improve my oral presentation in the future.My oral presentation is about my legend that is Datuk Sudirman HJ Arshad which is one of the best performer in Malaysia and even in the world.The reason i choose him as my legend is because he is a very talented and hardworking person.Besides,he is an educated performer.He has graduated from UNIVERSITI MALAYA,and he is taking law there.He can be a succesful lawyer but he choose to become a performer and make our coutry proud to his contribution.
My presentation is not that good because i did not prepare well and i always do.I think because of that my presentation is not good.My slide show is too simple and there is not much point that i elaborated.I simply read the slide show with only a little explanation.Besides that,i am nervous to talk in front of others because i am a shy person.My body temperature will suddenly increase
and thats make me sweat vigorously like i am playing football.Thats mean i'm in nervous condition.So,i think thats all i want to comment about.Anyway,i actually delightted with the marks that i get.I think it is fair with the effort that i give,but if miss want to give more i don't have any objection on that.Last but not least, a million thank you to all for borrowing your time to read my comment and thank you to our lecturer miss intan for giving the marks your contribution will be remember by all of us.
Thats all,Thank you very much
Assalamualaikum and have a nice day.

Itik King said...

Name : Mohd Haziq b Khairul Salleh
ID : FB09034
Sect : F09

Greetings to all....
Remembering back about my oral presentation......I might've deliver the worst presentation ever.(>_<)
Well,there are several factors that help such as PROCRASTINATION.
Aah,my one good value that I could never part with.I can't help it but to procrastinate my assignment to the very last minute.
It's the thing I've always been doing since primary school.So just to say,I did my presentation slide on the DAY of the PRESENTATION.
Which means I wasn't really that ready to present.Not to mention with all the nervousness that gathers into me when presenting.
I couldn't overcome my nervousness even though I know that I'm only presenting among ourselves and the FACT that EVERYONE WOULDN'T LISTEN TO MY PRESENTATION.
I know and I see and I'm not stupid.The night of my presentation,almost everyone is busy using the computers either surfing the internet or TRYING to play DotA.Yeah,I'm talking bout you Rahman.

Thing that I can do to improve my presentation?
STOP PROCRASTINATE AND START DOING MY ASSIGNMENT!!!!
And try to overcome my nervousness when presenting.
I might have to practice first before deliver my presentation too.
It helps me a lot as it gave me a confidence boost as I might be able control my presentation after a practice or two.

Things that I've learn from friends....huh....
Maybe it's that I could add video to the presentation?
I didn't know I could put a video on my presentation....If i knew,I would've done it to buy me more time when presenting.
Well,maybe adding a video to my slide wouldn't make it better anyway as I did a last minute work.
Instead,I might've done a better preparation so that I could deliver a smooth presentation.
Most of the students that presenting that night did a heck of a job.They present well,so well that I'm kinda jealous of 'em.

I guess that's it from me.....After all,what's done is done.
But in the future,I might need to stop procrastinate which might be IMPOSSIBLE for me.
Ok then,peace out.

@pek said...

NAME : AFIQ FIKRI B HAMID
ID : FB09028
SECT : F09LB

Assalamualaikum and morning guys.
In my opinion, I made the most terrible presentation by memorizing the points where I should be doing it spontaneously, a simple plus kind of weird presentation slides and the worst of it, I was nervous when presenting it. I'm not sure why but still for sure I did have enough time for preparation and maybe somewhere in the middle of it, I doubt myself.

There are so many things to improve for my future presentation to be much and much more better than the previous. I won't even bother to memorize text anymore as memorizing makes me nervous in case I forgot something. No more kids level of presentation slides and more formal slides design will be use to make my presentation more, you know, formal. And seriously, I need to make more preparation before presentation so that I won't get nervous anymore.

I learned so many things from my friends while they were presenting. Some of them made a very very (thumbs up) good presentation slides and as well can speak fluently during presentation. Most of them did a very good presentation, except for me. Still, there were a few people who made the presentation looks dull, but they cover it up with interesting point and add up a few pictures and songs to attract attention.

Thank you.

zirconia said...

name: SUHAIL HADRI BIN SHAMSUDIN
Id: FB09059
SEC: F09


a)well...to be honest i am not satisfy with my presentation and the marks given but it's the reality that i need to face.At that moment when i was present in front of people i was nervous since miss intan suddenly called me to present after caught cheat for dont want to present early :P After that all my idea's gone blank and i forgot what to said and the presentation become so fast till i cant even remember what i was present.For my presentation result i got so so marks which not make me happy,i think maybe im lack of preparation and fluently when talking or maybe i use too many broken english while talking make my marks like this.

b)In the future i think i need to be relax while present in front of people and dont push to hard to remember what to present because it make me nervous.I also think that i need to eat food that can strenghten my memory so that i dont turn blank while presentation.I also need to improve my grammar so that i dont need to talk in broken english and lastly i need to make up a bit of effort in preparation.

c)Things i learn from my friend is to make use of people around us.Eye contact also very important.Slideshow with music can make people more enjoy to your presentation.Lastly i learn many things about my friend characteristic and my friend legend ,some of the legend are just great and make me want to make them my legend =) tq.
go go chayo' O=(-.-O)

no war! said...

Name : Mohd Syazwi Helmi Bin jASHARI
ID : FB09020
Section : F090LB

Assalamualaikum to all...
First or all I Think my oral presentation very bad.........Due to my attitude and preparation.I think if I change my attitude I guarantee I can do more better than what had done.As a student I should care about English subject although I don't like English subject.Back to my presentation...preparation is needed to make my presentation clear and smooth during this process happen.My presentation is about myself and I think I can score better but meanwhile.During my presentation I detect some mistake had I done.First my speaking is not clear and so bad exactly.I talk like my presentation not carry mark and I speak just to fulfill the condition.Second mistake during my presentation is my slide show to long and have many cartoon picture.that's make me boring and mt presentation not interesting.
I think in the next presentation I should be prepare and do not make the mistake again.Before start the presentation I should calm and cool to get power for presentation.I should make my slide Show interesting and that's making me to give a power presentation.My slide show also ought to not have many effect.The next one is I should make my speaking more clear and interesting to make sure all my friends concentrate to heard my presentation.
Many thing I learned from my friends about their presentation.First, how to make presentation interesting and how to make cool slide show.So I hope I will be a better person soon

Unknown said...

Name : Mohd Azri Bin Abdul Rahman
ID : FB09058
Sec : F10

Well,i don't think i've done well in my oral presentation..and honestly i'm not satisfied with it.There is a lot of mistake i do during my presentation.Lack of confident,not well prepared,not enough slide and many more.I also realized that i'm not be able to give a speech in front of people.Furthermore,i'm too nervous and lost an idea and point about my legend.
To improve my presentation,i think i have to read a lot of english book so that it will help me to improve my vocabulary,skills on how to spread my point and learn a new word.Indeed,i also have to know my legend very well so that i can give a better information and share the interesting and he's successful.
About the thing i've learn from my friends presentation,there are many legend that inspire their life.And some of them do the topic about themselves which i think it is a very interesting topic to do.And base on their presentation,it will help me know a little bit more about themselves..
I think all my friends give their best shoot in the presentation~

Unknown said...

Name :Abdul Rahman Bin Mohamad
No. ID :FB09017
Section : F09

First of all ,assalamualaikum to all my friends..About my oral presentation, I think it is bad and not good enough. This is bacause I do not prepare early and do a job in a last minute. As a result my presentation is not complete as I anticipate. My presentation is about myself which is telling about my principle that we should always think positive no matter where we are. There are many weaknesses during my presentation which are my speaking is not fluent ,lack of point, not confident, and nervous.
Besides that slide show for my presentation is not interesting and too simple..However , I am really grateful and thankful to Miss Intan
for giving the marks of my oral presentation even though my oral is not good. There are many things that I can improve for my presentation which is I should always prepare early and always practice speaking so that I can speak fluently during my future presentation. What I can learn from my friends is I must always prepare a good and interesting slide show..Thank you very much especially to Miss Intan.

zack said...

Hi all,
My presentation is about Imam al- ghazali,the great legend in my life.He is great person but I’m not.Firstly,I think my presentation is really bad and make a lot of mistake especially when describe his life and education background.I describe it too short and not satisfied because I prepared this slide at last minute .Secondly,I only read from slide to slide and not elaborated for detail expalanation cause audience not understand and pay attention.

For my future presentation,I must prepared my slide early and understand the topic that I choose very clear.I also practice to speak in front of my friend to be much confident and try to communicate as well with audience.

First thing I learnt from my friend presentation is make the slide better like added sound and great animation.If can,I wanna insert the short movie about the topic of presentation.Secondly, always communicate with audience and presenting with loud and clear voices.This can make the presentation very happening and easy to understand.Next time,I wish can do much better than past presentation and get highest mark from Miss Intan...

Name:Zahairin Bin Zakaria
Matrics:FB09065
Section : 10

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Anonymous said...

Name:Mohd Hafiezal Bin Nordin
Id :FB09054
Sc:F10

Assalamualaikum & hye to all..

a. What do you think of your own presentation?
-I think that’s a lot of mistake that I have done during the presentation.. Slide not prepared, lack of confident, nervous, unable to speak fluently, and the main reason why I it happens is I not prepared to do presentation.. Honestly, I have enough information about the legend that I have choose.. For the past Oral Presentation I have Al-Khwarizmi as my legend. Why I choose him is because I can easily get more materials about him from internet. But the truth is I can’t elaborate about him, maybe its happens because I’m NOT PREPARED..

b. How can you improve your presentation in the future?
-Take part in speaking class, from this activities i think i can learn about speech making and gain experience.. Thoroughly prepared before giving a speech..Crucial that speaker think positive about themselves and the speech experience.. Use the power of visualization.. Use nervousness in a positive way..And don't expect perfection when delivering a speech..

c. Things you learn from your friends
-Base my classmate presentation i can know more detail about them for example their behavior, style and so on..
Besides that I also learn how to attract people using animation, sound effect, and visualization.. Using this animation we can attract audience and they will be with us and then we can catch their attention.. For me without attention from audience it still not perfect..

Next task, I will prepared and do the best..
Wassalam and thank you..

Unknown said...

NAME : AZUAN BIN ISMAIL
ID : FB09061
SECTION : 10

Assalamualaikum...
HELLOOOO…. today I want to tell about my oral presentation... Actually, it's so bad..There are many mistake that's I do..Thank a lots to Miss Intan because understanding me.. Emmm…Let’s I tell who is my legend for my oral presentation.. You know Tun Abdul Razak..He is 3rd Prime Minister Malaysia..Or we can call him “Bapa Pembangunan” because many development he do for Malaysia..
Okay…we stop talking about him..Let’s we talk about my bad oral presentation. There are many reason why I can’t make a good oral presentation...Firstly, I’m so nervous and blank after stand up in front of audience.. It’s because I’m not prepare..I’m finish do my slide in 2.45 am and present in 8.00 am..When I came in the class, I don’t have any idea how to explain in our audience about point In my slide..
Second mistake that I ‘do is when I start the presentation, my 3rd slide is not clear.. I use a yellow color for writing..It’s make the audience difficult to see my slide.. Also that, my slide so simple and not interesting..I’m should use more picture or video for make the audience give concentrate when I’m present..
Another mistake that’s I do is typing error in my slide and my slide so crowded.. It’s so embarrass..I should give more concentrate for make sure my slide do not have typing error.. I’m sure Miss Intan laugh with my slide..
There are many way for I can improve my presentation in the future such like right spelling and reading more news paper English for make sure I can improve my vocabulary.. Also that, I’m should be more prepare before I’m start my oral presentation..Do the work in last minute it’s not are good idea..
I think, many that’s I can learnt from my friends who is do the best presentation..Be a prepare is important whatever that’s work I do.. And the most important when someone is present is communication with our audience..
Next time, I will be do the best in my presentation..

Unknown said...

Name : Edzamila Bt Dzaidi
ID : FB09055
SECT : F10

Haiii everyone...
Ok, first of all i want ask u what u think mean of presentation? For my opinion,I think the presentation is a something we should practice of showing and explaining the content of a topic to an audience.
But is not happen to me b'coz i not practice very well and i also not explain totally with my audience. So, i think with my last presentation is not good. Before the presentation,i think i have already to present with my preparation but it's not enough. My presentation is about "My Legend" that is Tun Dr Mahathir,is Fourth Prime Minister of Malaysia. For the beginning i think i want do my presentation about "Myself" but it's not anything special about me to share with all of you. So i choice "My Legend" for my presentation. Why i think my presentation is not good because i'm so nervous and i can't speak with clearly. I don't know my audience can understand or not but i juz present my presentation. So funny.:)

After that i should improve my presentation for the future. So that i can be a nice and good presenter. For improve that i should prepared early,not nervous ( just relax ) and speak with clearly. I also must to put many picture and sound effect to,so that my audience not boring and interested to learnt. I also should act my talk such as rhetorical question or act surprised and so on.

Many thing i learnt with all my friend, to be a great presenter and good presentation. So that i can improve my presentation with interesting and not bored. I learnt how to get attractive audience when i saw all my friend do the presentation. They put a sound effect,used the variety of colouring font and also nice picture. They also very confidently and spoke with spontaneously.I hope next time, i shuold make a good presentation and be a good presenter to.

peace!!

ain said...

Name : ZainiPasihan Binti Zawawi
Id No : FB09052
Sect : F10


Assalamualaikum to everyone.....
Actually, when i do the presentation i'm not prepared so well because at first i choose to present about the legend. But then,in the last minute i choose to present about myself. About the legend, i choose to present about P.Ramli and had already found related information about him. But when i want to do the slide about him i realised that i don't really know and admired about him. I wonder if i can describe well about him but i don't think so. Because of that, i make up my mind and decided to present about myself.

That why i think my presention is bad,cause i don't really had time to practice. There were too many lack and mistake that i do when i presented about myself. Even though i already tried my best for that presentation but i'm still nervous cause i'm not confident and ready to do the presentation that day. I don't know if my voice is clear or not that day but i tried my best and i also notice that there are too many lack in my slide compared to others.

Some of my friend were good in their presentation and i learnd a lot from them. They were so confident and can spoke fluently not like me. Their slide also interesting with cool pictures and sound effect and i realise that kind of slide can attract people to listen. I don't know if i can do better next time, but i hope i can show an improvement even though not as good as other people. Hopefully i can be more confident than before. That's all from me.
Daa..sayonara

nasrul said...

ASSALAMUALIKUM...First of all,i feel so relieve andhappy that I have finished this oral presentation.This is because for me,I personally dont like too much to talk in front of the audience.I more prefer to voice out what am i going to say through pen and paper.Personally on my behalf ,I feel that this is the stepping stone for me to be a good presentator,before this i"m the person who is don"t know how to talk and handle the audience.I also think after this I will move forward in this presentation part because after that assesment I feel that I can handle the audience.Actually through this presentation,I realize that I have a good self confident it is is because on that day I"m the person who is volunteer to be a first person to present.Although I realize that ,there are so many things that I should repair in the future,in the pronouncation I should always practice myself to talk in english,this also can make me feel more comfortable and confident to use english as my secondary language.On the grammar part,I know that I have done too much mistake during my presentation,sometimes the mistakes appear because I want to finish up that assesment faster.After this I should always read english newspaperto improve my grammar and to enrich my vocabullary in english.If I have this two component,I beleive that I can perform better in my future presentation.

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Syed Al-Yahya said...

-Syed Musa Kazim Syed Zainal Abidin
-FB09030
-F09

assalammualaikum..
I think my presentation was the worst presentation of the day.There were so many mistake and technical problem,the most obvious mistake was about the intro song.Acctly that was plan to catch the audience or class attention apparently it turns out to be a disaster until the class next to us heard the intro song.Other than that I am not fully prepared.
Next time I will try to prepare earlier and more practice on my English.
Last but not least,I got quite a lot of info and moral values from my friends.
tq

Unknown said...

Name :Siti Nadhira Binti Mohammad Sunar
Matric No : FB09062
Section : F10

Hello.. and may god bless you..
Hmmm... about my presentation, i choose to present about a legend , and i choose Micheal Jackson as my legend.Weird right? I feel comfortable to choose MJ as my legend because i know him very well than other legend.MJ was a legend of pop singer in the world.I am one of his fan, i like the way he entertain people.
About my presentation, i think i made a mistake a little bit. Firstly, i started become so nervous and it made my speech not so clear and fluently.Then, my weakness is im was too shy to look the audience , and my eyes contact with audience was so poor. Secondly, my pronunciation was too bad.. its so shame..
But in the future, i will get hard to improve my presentation. I will do the best and dont want to repeat the same mistake. I wanna be the best presenter..to my friends iqbal thanks for your commendation, but i think my slide show still have a weakness some where.
Thank for all my friend that always support me and give a lot of ideas.

ANIS said...

Name : Anis hazwana Bt Mohd Wazir
Id : FB09063
Sec : F10
First of all, Assalamualaikum to Miss Intan and all my friends.
About my oral presentation.. I think is bad.. Quite worst exactly.. I think I can do better in my oral presentation but.. I’m not prepared well... My presentation is about my legend that is the first man who creates Video Games, Ralph Bear.
My big mistake in my oral presentation is nervousness. I'm lack of confident when in front of people. All point I want to describe, disappear permanently when I'm in that situation.
The legend I was choose is the first people who create a video game, Ralph bear. I choose this legend caused I am a video game lover. Actually, I’m prepared 98% with my presentation, but because of nervousness I became lost. Then, a big mistake I had do is I cannot speak English fluently during the presentation, my vocabulary also bad, it affect my presentation.. That a stupid mistake.

I positively think that there is lot of thing i need to improve based on my previous presentation.. First thing is myself, i must make sure that nervousness in myself. I must learn how to speak in front of people. Also I need to improve my pronunciations is good and my vocabulary wiil be better...
Lastly, without confident, presentation will not be better. So, I must learn more to make myself confident!

hafiz said...

Name:Muhammmad Hafizuddin b. Ismail
ID : FB09022
Sec: F09

Salam to all.....
I'm gonna comment on the last presentation that I have gone through.
Honestly,I have nothing much to say about it since it was long pass.I want to say it was nothing to be proud of.My presentation skills was so bad since I cannot apply what I'm learned all this time.But,I'm not surprised or disappointed at all because it was such an epidermic that I cannot deliver anything in front of audients.With a lot of grammatical error,lame pronounsation,and unmanaged points,my presentation was far far way from good.

There was so much room for improvement.Maybe the first thing that I have to check, is to being aware of what I'm saying and doing during the presentation because it feels like it was not me who stand in front.I'm not remember much about what happened at that time,and just talk like beating among the bush.

Luckily,there was many thing that I got from my friend's presentation....To be confident,talking like normal conversation,and have fun!For them,presentation is noting to be scare much but for me who always go for the meaning of something,a presentation was so much like a battle field.It is not count how I do it.But how I finish is really matter...

Unknown said...

Blh sya dpt kn your email.. Pls
26.02.19